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Originally posted by Theodore
First off, sorry to hear that. I went through the same thing at the same time. My dad was given 6 months to 2 years and he only made it a month and a half, so spend as much time with her as possible. As for the writing, indent the paragraphs and the start of the 3rd line in the 1st paragraph you say "my brother and me" I think its supposed to be my brother and I. Anywho, nice piece and good luck. I know I don't know you, but if you need someone to talk to lemme know. Its a shitty situation and talking can help.
Ted
I just saw this... thanks man. Same goes for you. If you ever want to talk, send me a PM.