Feedback

[Elektrozaunk]

i have been photographing for about 3 weeks total, and decided to make a black and white night project of my city.
i would love to get some constructive feed back on them, to "aim" me in the right direction thanks in advance.

ps. I'm using a fujifilm finepix s5700 7.1 mega pixel 10x optical zoom.

[Microcosm]

I really like the first one. The contrast works too. What was the shutter speed? I like how you can feel the motion the moving cars as opposed to the stopped cars and the background.

[squirrelmurphy]

it would be titties if you could rear-curtain sync a flash on one or two of the passing cars. its really nice as is, too...

[Elektrozaunk]

I really like the first one. The contrast works too. What was the shutter speed? I like how you can feel the motion the moving cars as opposed to the stopped cars and the background.

unfortunately i'm new at the photography deal, and i don't remember and i did delete the original from the camera, and when i transfered them on to aperture, i fucked up and got all that good stuff erased. but if this helps any my camera, has the shutter speed limited to a max of 4 seconds!

[smalls]

Exif IFD0

* Camera Make = FUJIFILM
* Camera Model = FinePix S5700 S700
* X-Resolution = 72/1 = 72.00
* Y-Resolution = 72/1 = 72.00
* X/Y-Resolution Unit = inch (2)
* Software/Firmware Version = Digital Camera FinePix S5700 S700 Ver1.00
* Last Modified Date/Time = 2007:09:27 20:25:58
* Copyright Owner =
* ? (0x0000) = (0)

Exif Sub IFD

* Exposure Time (1 / Shutter Speed) = 1/3 second = 0.33333 second
* Lens F-Number/F-Stop = 7/2 = F3.50
* Exposure Program = shutter priority (4)
* ISO Speed Ratings = 100
* Exif Version = 0220
* Original Date/Time = 2007:09:27 20:25:58
* Digitization Date/Time = 2007:09:27 20:25:58
* Compressed Bits per Pixel = 3/1 = 3.00
* Shutter Speed Value (APEX) = 8/5
Shutter Speed (Exposure Time) = 1/3.03 second
* Aperture Value (APEX) = 18/5
Aperture = F3.48
* Brightness (APEX) = -3/10
Brightness = 0.81 foot-lambert
* Exposure Bias (EV) = 0/1 = 0.00
* Max Aperture Value (APEX) = 18/5 = 3.60
Max Aperture = F3.48
* Metering Mode = pattern / multi-segment (5)
* Light Source / White Balance = unknown (0)
* Flash = Flash did not fire, compulsory flash mode
* Focal Length = 11/1 mm = 11.00 mm
* FlashPix Version = 0100
* Colour Space = sRGB (1)
* Image Width = 640 pixels
* Image Height = 480 pixels
* Focal Plane X-Resolution = 1120/1 = 1120.00
* Focal Plane Y-Resolution = 1120/1 = 1120.00
* Focal Plane X/Y-Resolution Unit = centimeter (3)
* Image Sensing Method = one-chip color area sensor (2)
* Custom Rendered = normal process (0)
* Exposure Mode = auto exposure (0)
* White Balance = auto (0)
* Scene Capture Type = standard (0)
* Sharpness = normal (0)
* Subject Distance Range = unknown (0)