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  1. 10-03-2004, 10:41 PM #1
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    My new song

    heres my latest song lyrics

    C5 A#5 G#5

    I can’t Sleep
    I’m tossing and turning her face in my dreams
    I don’t Know
    If I’ll be able to get up tomorrow

    staring at the ceiling
    Watching it crack apart
    Listening to the rain
    Her voice in my heart

    Lieing in bed
    Staring at Pictures of all of my friends
    I’d give up it all
    Just for one night in her arms

    And I give it all give it all give it all
    up just to see her face
    All of my habits all of my friends
    just for one night

    (Guitar solo)

    I can’t Sleep
    I’m tossing and turning her face in my dreams
    I don’t Know
    If I’ll see her again
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  2. 10-03-2004, 10:51 PM #2
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    Quote Originally Posted by ak_powder_monkey

    I can’t Sleep
    I’m tossing one off on her face in my dreams
    I really like this lyric, it's pretty catchy.
  3. 10-03-2004, 11:36 PM #3
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    Since it's listed in the lyrics, should it be implied that you will be singing the guitar solo?
  4. 10-03-2004, 11:48 PM #4
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    Quote Originally Posted by Darkside
    Since it's listed in the lyrics, should it be implied that you will be singing the guitar solo?
    Actully I'll be singing "parenthesis guitar solo close parenthesis" jackass
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  5. 10-04-2004, 12:35 AM #5
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    Quote Originally Posted by ak_powder_monkey
    heres my latest song lyrics

    C5 A#5 G#5

    I can’t Sleep
    I’m turning and tossing in her face in my dreams
    I don’t Know
    If I’ll be able to get it up tomorrow

    staring at the ceiling
    As he humps my crack apart
    Listening to the strain
    Her voice in my heart

    Lieing in bed
    Staring at Pictures of Labi Siffre's pole
    I’d give up it all
    Just for one night in her arms

    And I'd give it all give it all give it all
    up on her face
    All of my deviant sexual habits, all of my friends
    just for one night spent dogging behind Kmart

    (Guitar solo)

    I can’t hold back
    I’m turning and tossing in her face in my dreams
    I don’t Know
    If she'll like it in her eye.
    Your lyrics are interesting.
  6. 10-04-2004, 10:07 AM #6
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  7. 10-04-2004, 10:14 AM #7
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  8. 10-04-2004, 10:43 AM #8
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  9. 10-04-2004, 12:24 PM #9
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    Hate to squash a brotha's thunder, (nearly as much as I hate to bump this), but:

    Your lyrics are almost (almost) as monotonously boring as the ol' standby C/A/G. Sure, it might work for Angus & Jimmy......But you Sir, are no Angus or Jimmy.

  10. 10-04-2004, 01:03 PM #10
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    AKPM,

    What kinda pussy-ass Bullshit lyrics are these!!??
    there is no excuse for this shit.

    Rock music needs to be bold, unfiltered, raw, excitable, mean, devilish and true.

    This is some over romanticized weirdo shit you came up with.

    Sack up and write about drugs and sex. I should hope that your guitar playing is beastly as well.

    Other than that, it's pretty good.
  11. 10-04-2004, 01:14 PM #11
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    Quote Originally Posted by bad_roo
    Your lyrics are interesting.
    LMFAO. With roo's lyrics you could quite possibly have a hit on your hands.
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  12. 10-04-2004, 07:53 PM #12
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    actully its folk music with interesting guitar parts, I'm just to lazy to tab them Constructive imput is encouraged!
    Its not that I suck at spelling, its that I just don't care
  13. 10-04-2004, 08:07 PM #13
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    Quote Originally Posted by Duder
    AKPM,

    What kinda pussy-ass Bullshit lyrics are these!!??
    there is no excuse for this shit.

    Rock music needs to be bold, unfiltered, raw, excitable, mean, devilish and true.

    This is some over romanticized weirdo shit you came up with.

    Sack up and write about drugs and sex. I should hope that your guitar playing is beastly as well.

    Other than that, it's pretty good.
    He's singing what he knows about, and drugs and sex definitely have no part in AKPM's life. Just be lucky its not about XC skiing and hiking with Ingrid.
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  14. 10-04-2004, 09:10 PM #14
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    Quote Originally Posted by bigsugar
    Dude.....Jesus......are you a real person?
    Im still laughing. I think the same thing all the time.
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