Originally Posted by
bfree
That's strange, maybe you have a lightroom setting to clear metadata on import or export.
For the most part I like your compositions, but the missed focus really hurts. It's definitely a focus problem, not SS. Which focus tracking setting are you using? Whichever you choose, understand how it works, pick a single focus point (don't let it choose for you), and keep that point right on the target throughout the action.
That lens is plenty sharp at f/4, but your depth of field is going to be so narrow that it's going to be challenging to get everything in focus. For starters, I'd recommend stopping down to at least f/5.6 or so and maybe even drop the ISO a little bit. 1/1000 should be sufficient for most of this action. Again, tough to make more specific recommendations without EXIF.
As far as post processing, I'd recommend a warmer white balance and a bit more liberal usage of the noise reduction. The black and white also doesn't do much for me in a few of those shots, but I understand the lighting doesn't look so good.
Keep it up!