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Blue
By Patrick McCormick

D G

Blue In the Mountains
Blue in your Eyes
well i would give up anything
just to make you smile

your hair is golden
just like the sun
tied up in a ponytail
ready to have some fun

C Em
I knew I wanted you since the day
I saw your face I was blown away

D G
When I’m in the mountains
It makes me high
All alone up there
I’ll say goodbye

To your voice
haunting me
To my urge
to be with thee

C Em
i knew there was something wrong
When you wouldn’t play along

D G
Up in the mountains
Is where I’ll be
If I should be needed there
come Find me

(Intrumental)

D G
Blue in the mountains
Blue in your eyes
I would give up anything
Just to see you smile

i dont know, my glasses arent so good. but is that a regular bill shakespeare over there? [/matt foley]

heh :cool:

as a bit of a song writer myself i think it is a pretty good song its a panty droper

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Originally Posted by house

i dont know, my glasses arent so good. but is that a regular bill shakespeare over there? [/matt foley]

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LOL!!

akpm, not bad, but please change the line that ends with "thee." Unless this song is meant to be performed by a minstrel, that is.

what rhymes with me and mean you other then thee?

akpm wrote "what rhymes with me and mean you other then thee?"
It does'nt work for me, but "He" is an option! :biggrin:

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Originally Posted by Svengali

akpm wrote "what rhymes with me and mean you other then thee?"
It does'nt work for me, but "He" is an option! :biggrin:

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While also it does not work for me,
this other option He.
There is another choice as clear as could be
to rid this song of its gratuitous thee,
"To my urge
to take a pee"

Chinga dinga hinga binga!

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